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Crap!, I'm running out of air, it's getting harder to breath, I'm pretty sure I'm gonna di-
-DUNK!-
What the hell was that?! "Hello?" I said, "Matthew?, Finally!" said Dante he opens the coffin, I reach for his hand, and he pulls me out of the burring dirty coffin. I take a deep breath of the fresh air away from that death trap. So many people were here, and I think most of them are friends.
"Just in time, but Dante, I need to tell you something." I questioned, "yeah?, what?" Replied Dante "not to be a buzz kill, but, I have no idea who you or anyone here, I'm pretty sure I lost my memory from amnesia or something." "you're kidding.....right?" worried Dante.
"Nope, it's the plain out tr- GAAAH my head!" I shouted, while I was shouting and holding my head from the pain, I was in some fast movement area with much images of Dante, but soon, I started to remember who he is. "Are you alright?" asked Dante "yeah, just head pain, but during that, I started to remember who you are, and I remember now." I replied "No one else though?" Dante asked "yup, no one else." I replied once more. After that day Dante tried his best to make me remember my old friends, but no luck, I couldn't just remember. But I do remember how we met, we met in school, in the 5th grade, so that means we've been friends for a very long time, I even remembered our first fight we had, it was over a dumb action figure, but it sure does seem to hold precious memories.
From then to now, it seems we still have a precious friendship. Other from him, ME, who tried to kill me, and why? I'm going to try to find out, so then I can get my revenge, and destroy him. After a few hours, I went to what my ID said where I live. I went to charlie road from a bus, and looked ahead of the house of 13 charlie road, it looked like a haunted house to me. I took my first few steps towards the house and already sensed a feeling of haunts around me, I felt very nervous, like if I'm going to be jumped by someone, when I reached the door, I press that one button next to door hearing the door bell through the door and towards my ear drum, i waited for 10 seconds and ringed the door bell again.
Something is suspicious, I went to the side of the bush and looked threw the window, and it looked like no one even lived there, but yet there was furniture all over the area. I went to door, but before i even got back up the ledge, I Jumped from terror from the feeling of my leg being grabbed, I swinged my leg around kicking something, and when I looked, it was a rattle snake!, I jumped back away from it's distance, making sure it's chances of biting me are small. I look around for a key, and found one in my jacket next to a bunch of paper. I inserted a key and opened the door went inside before the rattle snake gets in for it's revenge. I felt so exhausted and sore from being in that coffin for hours, I went straight up stairs and went to a room on the right, and when I saw that bed on the left side of my room, I jumped straight on it for a really big rest for this night. Until tomorrow, I will then try to find the suspect.
-End of Chapter 2-

Here I lie, in a dark creeping of a small capsule, there's no lights, no room, it's some sort of coffin I guess. There doesn't seem to be a opening, I'm in one hell of a situation, but enough of that. My serious problem is, who am I? Where am I? What am I? Why am I here? I guess I need to find out, but to do that, I'll need to get out of this coffin.
I checked and emptied out my pockets, I found a lighter, a wallet, and a phone. Maybe I can call someone, wait.... a wallet! Maybe I find out who I am! I opened it, looked inside, and found an ID card, let's see....

Name: Matthew Core
Date of birth: 01/01/94
address: 13 charlie road
Age: 16

So... I'm Matthew Core?, the picture of me maybe is me, I'll find out later if it is me. I'm 16? So, that means it's 2010. Alright I have some clues of who I might be. I used my cellphone to call someone named Dante. Let's See if he can help me.
Ring Ring Ring...heh.
???: Hello?
Me: hello?! Dante?
Dante: yeah! Matthew?! you sound like your worried, is everything alright?
Me:(so i am Matthew) No!, I'm stuck in some coffin!, I think I've been burried alive!
Dante: My god!, alright dude, I'm coming to dig in all sorts of coffins! Call me when you need help! Don't worry buddy, I'm going to get help from everyone to get you out of there.
Me: All right... hurry.....please.
-End of call-
Okay....let's see if i get rescued before i die from lack of oxygen.
-End of Chapter 1-

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